I'm tired for Sam. I want to hear more about how Sam can get Dean somewhat under control; back from the edge so relatively quickly. I still hate to think that all the work he already did is gone. Good thing he came back as a younger person because how else could he have the energy to do it all over again? Ruby deserves a medal. Just saw one of the comments on this chapter where cassopeia said your work and Disturbia are her favorites. I found Disturbia amazingly written and very hard to get through. I prefer this! It has more hope and Sam is not nearly as self-involved as in Disturbia. Yes, here, maybe he wants and needs Dean for himself so much that it's not always the best thing for Dean...but Dean's already a demon; Sam's trying to get his humanity back. I see yours as much more hopeful that Disturbia which is a story that really made me THINK about a lot of things, but I like it when Sam's intentions are really pure. It seems that way here.
This is making me tired