Thank you! That's what I wanted, so I'm thrilled that both emotions came through, along with the tension between them, the demon holding back all his strength, the meaning behind the affectionate name calling of their past. Lovely feedback, thanks so much -- and Happy Valentine's Day!
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Date: 2010-02-15 02:23 pm (UTC)