I was just starting to really worry about your update, and then I remembered I owed you more feedback. My mistake!
One of the things I love about your writing, is the subtle, easy reminders of just how long the boys were together. Like the reference to Sam's eight decades of hunting. That flowed so smoothly and seamlessly.
Sam's methods of getting his demon to talk were so perfect and so fitting. Sam knows him so well. But Dean's words hurt. Just hearing him say how broken he is hurt my heart. After rereading it though, his concern about hurting Sam just makes him seem all the more on the path toward regaining his former control (I hope, I hope). He wasn't perfect then, I know, but he was so much better.
By the end, the true sound of Dean is ringing through the Demon's words, and I can't help but feel optimistic.
I'm really working forward to the next chapter?
This really is great. And I so appreciate all your hard work
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One of the things I love about your writing, is the subtle, easy reminders of just how long the boys were together. Like the reference to Sam's eight decades of hunting. That flowed so smoothly and seamlessly.
Sam's methods of getting his demon to talk were so perfect and so fitting. Sam knows him so well. But Dean's words hurt. Just hearing him say how broken he is hurt my heart. After rereading it though, his concern about hurting Sam just makes him seem all the more on the path toward regaining his former control (I hope, I hope). He wasn't perfect then, I know, but he was so much better.
By the end, the true sound of Dean is ringing through the Demon's words, and I can't help but feel optimistic.
I'm really working forward to the next chapter?
This really is great. And I so appreciate all your hard work