Thanks so much for taking the time to analyze and give real feedback, I appreciate it more than I can say. I also tend to leave feedback that's rather detailed, that's part of the fun of reading other people's work. So please continue to give me the details, I relish it all. And love that you 'got' that parallel process thing so acutely :)

Oh, and since we're very new to LJ too, feel free to ask if you don't get something in LJ-speak. We're learning it right along with you!