Thank you so much for this lovely feedback, especially that those last lines worked for you, they were probably my favorites. I'm really glad that the quiet came through too, and that it felt soothing -- it seemed like what the boys so need right now. Thanks again for reading and commenting!
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Date: 2012-11-22 04:32 am (UTC)