Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback - especially because I know what an analytical mind you have :) I'm thrilled that those scenes worked, since I was trying to convey alot with only a little. So yay! Pace and sense of intrigue were two things I wanted to get right in this fic, so very pleased that so far that's working for you too. Hope you like the rest!
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Date: 2013-08-03 12:07 am (UTC)