http://saltandburnboys.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] saltandburnboys.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] runedgirl 2015-06-02 05:45 am (UTC)

My gosh, this is gorgeous. This line here -

'Six minutes, and the last kiss before he opens the door is soft, Sam’s tongue soothing the places where his teeth claimed Dean’s lips.

Makes me wanna tear up a little with how perfect it is. *Clutches heart* I love fics like this - the ones that fit seemlessly into canon, and just feel completely right.

I've always loved the idea of their brotherly rivalry/banter turning heated - all that tension suddenly bursting free as they give in, and this fic really works that angle perfectly.

As always, beautiful language too, hon. Thanks so much for sharing.

xx

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