Wow, I really loved this. The brevity adds to the impact, everything concentrated on this moment. Having an outside POV was great - it was us, we're Scott, and we're feeling the suffering as he does. The force of Dean's anger and passion - spot on. Sam, trying to ease Dean out of his fury. Their stolen moment of kissing and reassuring each other they;re okay was lovely and heartbreaking, with the added sweetness of Castiel's protectiveness. Marvelous!
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Date: 2018-12-21 06:46 pm (UTC)