I had read this before, but didn't comment, new to LJ and fanfic, blah, blah, blah...

Anyway. :)

This was terrific. The characterizations were well done, each one of them had a distinct voice. You brought out their vulnerability without emasculating them. :)

I don't think I've ever read more emotional hotness, from the building of lust to the hot sex, every bit is laced with emotional intensity that brings it alive. Beautiful!