I had read this before, but didn't comment, new to LJ and fanfic, blah, blah, blah...
Anyway. :)
This was terrific. The characterizations were well done, each one of them had a distinct voice. You brought out their vulnerability without emasculating them. :)
I don't think I've ever read more emotional hotness, from the building of lust to the hot sex, every bit is laced with emotional intensity that brings it alive. Beautiful!
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Date: 2009-10-03 09:14 am (UTC)Anyway. :)
This was terrific. The characterizations were well done, each one of them had a distinct voice. You brought out their vulnerability without emasculating them. :)
I don't think I've ever read more emotional hotness, from the building of lust to the hot sex, every bit is laced with emotional intensity that brings it alive. Beautiful!