That was GORGEOUS!!!!! I loved your dialogue. It was sooo believable and deep that I could easily see all of this happening to J2 for real. I was so glad to hear more of Jensen's POV -- especially him admitting that he had wanted Jared way before Jared felt the same way. And I LOVED Jared's intensity and pure adoration of Jensen (who could really blame him?). And their sex scenes...one word: HOT!!!!!! Even them trying to talk and NOT have sex was HOT!!!!
After reading a story like this, it's almost impossible to believe that Jensen and Jared haven't at least been attracted to each other in real life -- even if they haven't acted on it... yet (smirk).
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Standing Ovation!!!!!
Date: 2007-06-30 01:25 am (UTC)After reading a story like this, it's almost impossible to believe that Jensen and Jared haven't at least been attracted to each other in real life -- even if they haven't acted on it... yet (smirk).
Well done, Lynsey!