http://bad-buttercup.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bad-buttercup.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] runedgirl 2011-09-15 04:51 am (UTC)

As with everything you write, this does not disappoint.

I liked the slow buildup to having them become lovers, although I must say that waiting 12 chapters for the hot sex is hard on a girl. But the wait was totally worth it because, in addition to being really scorching, you always make the sex emotional, sensual and really beautiful.

And this line...

Is that why you kept sending us all that fanfiction?” he asks, and Kim just smiles.

Awesome.

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