Thank you SO much for this incredible feedback, it really makes my day to know what you found particularly 'right' about this story -- and the line that felt of place too (which I agree with you about -- I think that might have been ME sinking into fangirl mode for a second and losing Jensen's voice. lol)

I also love some of the things you mentioned about J2 - the way their relationship really does seem so reciprocal, how much real love there is there. And it's just a sense I have that Jensen could get off on being 'manhandled', especially by someone like Jared, who he can trust enough to really let go with. Yum.

Thanks again so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed this!
Lyns