I know this fic is pretty old so you didn't have the luxury of the later J2 fics that seem more "informed" about the details of J2's lives (thanks to all that we've learned about the boys from the various cons and interviews throughout the years), so your fic is kind of at a disadvantage in that regard, but I'd still say it's one of the VERY BEST. Definitely goes to my favorites.

It just felt so real, you know? Like I could literally see all of it happening as I read the words on the pages. And damn, that was some very hot action there! *swoons*