I've just read this wonderful 12 chapter story just now from start to finish and I have to say that you did a terrific job with it. My god it was like being at a fair and having all the excitment and sometimes pain but you made it all happy and wonderful in the end and I truly enjoyed reading it and delving into it and soaking up the static atmosphere that they caused by not admitting their feeling for each other until the very end. I would so love to see a sequel to this.
Thanks for sharing.