You did a very good job at portraying Jen and Jay. I would like to say more about the previous chapters, but all I can really think about right now is that AMAZINGLY well-written sex scene. I've read a lot of slash in other fandoms and I'm still pretty new to J2 fic, but that had to be one of the best/hottest/most realistic slash scenes I have ever read.
And the little joke withe Kim and the fanfic made me chuckle.
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You did a very good job at portraying Jen and Jay. I would like to say more about the previous chapters, but all I can really think about right now is that AMAZINGLY well-written sex scene. I've read a lot of slash in other fandoms and I'm still pretty new to J2 fic, but that had to be one of the best/hottest/most realistic slash scenes I have ever read.
And the little joke withe Kim and the fanfic made me chuckle.
Very nicely done! Loved it.