I know I've said this before but I *love* your feedback!! And I completely agree about the POV shifts - I was a little worried about them, rewrote some of the transitions, and was still worried when I posted.
Come on, kissy scenes weren't exclusive to Paley, everything built up to that. And remember the SPN promotion video? *cough cough* Jared grabbed/slapped Jensen's butt on TV :D
How did I miss *that*???? You realize you've just set me up for a night a searching YouTube for that, don't you?? Evil!!!:))
Porn is great, don't get me wrong, but I'm a sucka for sweetness.
You know, I never used to be. Actually used to run screaming from anything that smacked of being even a little "sweet", but something about these boys . . . they just make me *happy*. Just can't seem to rip them to shreds with the angst. Even the completely smutty thing I have waiting in the wings ends cute!! Now Sam and Dean are a completely different story. . . them I show no mercy.
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Come on, kissy scenes weren't exclusive to Paley, everything built up to that. And remember the SPN promotion video? *cough cough* Jared grabbed/slapped Jensen's butt on TV :D
How did I miss *that*???? You realize you've just set me up for a night a searching YouTube for that, don't you?? Evil!!!:))
Porn is great, don't get me wrong, but I'm a sucka for sweetness.
You know, I never used to be. Actually used to run screaming from anything that smacked of being even a little "sweet", but something about these boys . . . they just make me *happy*. Just can't seem to rip them to shreds with the angst. Even the completely smutty thing I have waiting in the wings ends cute!! Now Sam and Dean are a completely different story. . . them I show no mercy.
Cheers,
Kat